This is really good, and you have quite a good idea for this. Although it does get a tad repetitive, which is fine. Just try to work on that. Your mastering could also be a little bit better, especially with the white noise. With that, try to make a more powerful and harder hitting drop, maybe using a different lead or some better chords :) Overall i really enjoyed this, you're getting quite good now and you have tons of potential. Hopefully working on those few things you could really go somewhere :p